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Year 5 Science report comments (Australian Curriculum v9)

Short answer: A strong Year 5 Science comment names what the student can do against the v9 achievement standard, adds one specific detail from their work, and ends with a next step. Use the 10 free comments below as starting points: replace [Name], pick the tier that matches your evidence, and edit each one to fit the student.

In Year 5, the v9 Science achievement standard asks students to explain how structural features and behaviours help living things survive, describe how weathering, erosion, transportation and deposition change the land, model how light travels to explain shadows, reflection and refraction, and use particle ideas to explain the properties of solids, liquids and gases. In inquiry they identify variables, consider risks, measure with precision and describe patterns and trends. By Semester 2, the standard describes what students should be able to do by the end of the year, so it's the right yardstick for these comments.

10 free Year 5 Science report comments

Taken from our full comment bank. Replace [Name] with the student's name. They use no gendered pronouns. The tier column follows a common mapping (Above ≈ A/B, At ≈ C, Working towards ≈ D/E), but your school's moderation decides the grade.

Strand	Tier	Comment
Semester 2 opener	At	[Name] has worked steadily in Science and achieved the expected standard this semester.
Biological sciences	Above	[Name] explains in detail how particular structural features and behaviours help living things survive in their habitats, using well-chosen examples.
Earth and space sciences	At	[Name] describes key processes that change Earth's surface, including weathering and erosion.
Physical sciences	Working towards	With support, [Name] names sources of light and is beginning to explain how shadows form.
Chemical sciences	At	[Name] uses simple models or diagrams to show how particles are arranged in each state.
Science as a human endeavour	At	[Name] describes examples of collaboration leading to advances in science and of scientific knowledge changing over time.
Science inquiry	Above	[Name] poses investigable questions and makes well-reasoned predictions, then plans safe investigations that identify the variables to be changed and measured.
Science inquiry	At	[Name] uses equipment to generate data with appropriate precision and constructs representations to describe patterns and relationships.
Science inquiry	Working towards	With support, [Name] poses simple questions and is beginning to identify what to change in an investigation.
Next step	At	[Name] is encouraged to check whether an investigation is fair before drawing conclusions.

Free tool: build a Year 5 comment from these samples. Pick strands and tiers, add a first name and pronoun, and copy a paragraph with a live word and character count.

Worked example: putting a comment together

An opener, two strand comments and a next step, for a fictional student at the standard:

Ava has made sound progress in Science this semester. Ava explains how the structural features and behaviours of living things help them survive in their habitats. Ava poses questions, makes reasoned predictions and plans safe investigations, identifying variables to change and measure. A next step for Ava is to use more precise scientific vocabulary when explaining results.

57 words, 377 characters including spaces. Before using it for a real student, swap one general phrase for a specific detail, such as the investigation they ran or a question they asked.

How to write a Year 5 Science report comment

Start from your evidence, not the comment bank. Decide the student's level for each strand you taught from work samples and assessments, then find wording that matches.
Only comment on what you taught this semester. Most classes cover one or two Science understanding sub-strands per term, plus inquiry. Leave out the rest.
Use a simple structure. Opener, one or two strand comments, then one next step. Keep the tone of the opener consistent with the grade.
Add one specific detail. A named investigation, model or question makes a bank comment sound like it was written about this child.
Write for parents. Keep curriculum codes out of the report and explain any technical term the student used.
Check the length early. Many reporting systems cap characters per subject. Paste one finished comment in before you write the rest.
Read every comment aloud once. It catches repeated sentence openings, the wrong name and comments copied across a whole class.

What to look for in Year 5 work samples

Adaptation tasks where the student linked a feature or behaviour to survival in a specific habitat.
Landform or erosion models, and whether they distinguished slow from rapid change.
Light investigations with torches and mirrors, and the diagrams the student drew of light paths.
Particle diagrams or role-plays for solids, liquids and gases, and how the student used them to explain a property.
An investigation plan that names the variable changed and the one measured, and a graph or table with a described trend.

Vocabulary that signals the Year 5 standard (use it only if the student actually used it): adaptation, structural feature, behaviour, weathering, erosion, deposition, reflection, refraction, particle, variable, pattern, trend, source of error.

What's new in Year 5 inquiry: Year 5 is where the standard first asks students to identify variables (what to change and what to measure) and to spot possible sources of error. Planning now also includes risks and intercultural considerations, which is new wording worth using if you taught it.

Year 5 Science in v9 at a glance

Each line paraphrases part of the Year 5 Science achievement standard and content descriptions on the Australian Curriculum website. The full pack has six comments for each of these, and nine for inquiry.

Biological sciences: features and behaviours for survival (AC9S5U01): Explain how the structure and behaviour of living things help them survive in their habitats.
Earth and space sciences: changes to Earth's surface (AC9S5U02): Describe how weathering, erosion, transportation and deposition change the land, slowly or rapidly.
Physical sciences: light (AC9S5U03): Identify light sources and model how light travels to explain shadows, reflection and refraction.
Chemical sciences: particles in solids, liquids and gases (AC9S5U04): Use the arrangement and motion of particles to explain the properties of solids, liquids and gases.
Collaboration and using scientific knowledge (AC9S5H01, AC9S5H02): Describe how collaboration advances science and how knowledge changes; identify how science informs people's actions.
Questioning, investigating, analysing and communicating (AC9S5I01-AC9S5I06): Pose investigable questions and reasoned predictions; plan safe investigations, noting risks, intercultural considerations and variables; measure with precision; describe patterns and trends; identify error; communicate for purpose and audience.

Common mistakes

Grade and comment don't match, such as "outstanding" next to a C, or "working towards" next to a B.
Commenting on a strand that wasn't taught or assessed this semester.
Describing activities ("we studied forces") instead of what the student can do.
Next steps that are too vague to act on, such as "keep trying hard".
Using Version 8.4 achievement standard wording if your school now reports against v9. Check which version your school uses.

Other year levels: Year 3 · Year 4 · Year 5 · Year 6

FAQ

Are these Year 5 Science comments aligned to Australian Curriculum v9?

They were written against the Australian Curriculum Version 9.0 Year 5 Science achievement standard and content descriptions, and each one was checked by hand against that standard. They are not official ACARA material, and your school's reporting policy and A to E descriptors come first.

Can I use these free comments in my reports?

Yes, for your own reporting. Edit each one so it reflects the student's actual work, and add one specific detail. A comment bank is a starting point, not a judgement of any child.

Were these comments written with AI?

Yes, with AI help. Mint drafted them with AI assistance, then checked and edited them by hand against the v9 achievement standard. Read every comment before you use it.

How long should a Year 5 Science report comment be?

Follow your school's guidance and any character limit in your reporting software. A common pattern is an opener, one or two strand comments and a next step, which comes to about 45 to 90 words. Paste your draft into the system early to check it fits.

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Written with AI help and checked by hand against each v9 achievement standard. You don't need it to use the free comments on these pages.

Curriculum source: Australian Curriculum Version 9.0, Year 5 Science. © Australian Curriculum, Assessment and Reporting Authority (ACARA) 2010 to present, unless otherwise indicated. Material from the Australian Curriculum website (accessed 22 October 2026) was modified: focus lines and comments paraphrase the achievement standard. Licensed under CC BY 4.0. ACARA does not endorse any product that uses the Australian Curriculum or make any representations as to the quality of such products.

Disclosure: Mint sells the Science report comments pack mentioned above. Sample comments and guidance on this page were written with AI assistance and checked by hand against the v9 achievement standard; read and edit before use. Not affiliated with or endorsed by ACARA or any education department. Last updated 2026-10-22.